Intelligent Intercourse

[Bacchus]

A person can only do so much
with the soul they are given
the places they go can only be guided
by the feelings in side
the soul and the places they find
to hide and cover the thoughts
mind grazing on the sweet
demons that pollute the eager
and tasteless images that fill
the parts of our bodies that
no surgeon or the lords themselves can touch
demented visions cross
with tormented thoughts
to arrange themselves into
a sequence of events
a plot of a destruction of the inner body
all memory is erased and collapsed
time seizes and then it hits
the dream is over and you lay
on wet sheets soaked in cold sweat

[parch]

i loved this one the first time i got it in my email box from you. glad you finally posted. keep it up.

___---parch

[machinery]

really took to this....very descriptive with the essence of a dream....and I myself have tried to described my dreams and the reasons for why they happen and the feelings before, during and after they happen. You made it right here. Execellent. My favorite line was this:

"and tasteless images that fill
the parts of our bodies that
no surgeon or the lords themselves can touch "

simply wonderful.

Keep it up man, writing and posting.

[ranter]

i just read this one...for some reason i skipped over it....i liked how this really flowed...it just kept going...the first time i read it i just couldnt stop and think about it...i had to wait until i was done...i liked how that happened. so i had to keep reading it and keep analyzing it. i liked it though